Sonning Flowers

Sunday morning at Sonning

Nearly bell chimes dynamic
Peal aloud, nursery rhymes recurring.
Their echoes carried on the flow
Reduce, as and distance.
Wild Flower Court on the morning sun,
On the spider web spun early
Dew Hang lanterns filled with light.
The boys dance with kite wild
A blackbird sings in the bush nearby,
Dragonflies on their wings of gauze.
Hikers on the towpath preamble
At their morning walk.
The love of living things on land rich crust
For all too soon, they turn to dust.

YES! If I could use more caps, I would. This poem is absolute beauty, and the turn of the last two lines is the thing which has so long now, I can not get out of my mind. Thank you for writing this poem soulmate.

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It does so in the sense that it is nature. But there are words like strong and peaceful chimes that ring do for me, especially the last line.

Yes, it is a peaceful poem, with a little melancholy, especially expressed in the line "For all too soon, they turn to dust."

The last line makes the reader realize the ultimate truth bitter death. Thus, it does not sound peaceful to me.

No, it is not quiet, there is plenty of action. Under danger lurks.

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Yes I love it.

It begins with a roar of noise that turns later, alone. Nice read.

Wow Cassie, because I love your poem and love the quietness of it "and you want to go to this magical place .. lol Here is a star, and wish I could give you more.] [Smiling

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I have a feeling of activity - with many pictures and sound soft. a™¥ More busy - that quiet
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It ... and I think it's a remarkable writing ... really

I like how you look at things every day in their own "yarn" beauty.

Yes Cassie fantastic. :)

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That being said, I must add comments
It is beautifully written, it is in my heart, I believe that we two must be connected to a certain level, when I read things you write.

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